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    There
    that instant
    Between when the wave crashes
    And the stones sweep the sand
    Between the moment
    When innocence dies
    And heavy knowledge
    Wraps its icy fingers around your heart
    When sun rises
    And breathes fire on the day
    When you wish time would not advance
    And just stop
    But it continues anyway

    That which you can no longer evade
    As the light falls
    And you cannot look away
    What will you find
    A reflection in a mirror
    Or a muddied pool
    Or what you always knew,
    And denied
    What price
    That it should all
    Just run
    Like tears
    Or rain drops down
    The window pane

  • #2
    it sounds kind of manly

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    • #3
      Friends,

      I think its amazing. thank you for sharing.

      dr. Darrell of Michigan.

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      • #4
        Thanks for the feedback
        Natta16...well...some of us cannot escape our destiny...heheheheheeheheh, but what would a manly person know about crying.
        Dr Darrell ..thanks you always say nice stuff, I guess you are polite !

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        • #5
          Originally posted by Coruja-the-Owl View Post
          Thanks for the feedback
          Natta16...well...some of us cannot escape our destiny...heheheheheeheheh, but what would a manly person know about crying.
          Actually, I immediately recognized your writing, Ed)

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          • #6
            This is good I like it.

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            • #7
              Originally posted by Coruja-the-Owl View Post
              There
              The window pane
              This is such a great way of finishing the poem. The whole poem was this abstract confuddle of emotional experiences. And to end it on such a simple image of the window pane, really made this poem speak to me.

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