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    I've stumbled upon your thoughts,
    That you had scattered,
    Like a hyperactive kid scatters
    His toys all over the playground.
    They did hurt as I stepped on them
    Barefoot.
    And then they ganged on me.
    They squatted my empty skull,
    Like tourists from Belarus
    Are squatting buildings in Chernobyl.
    But at least they would turn on
    The lights, that had been off
    For three decades.



  • #2
    im so glad youre back) thanks for contributing to the creative writing section. i think its the best part of interpals forums unless you like talking about muslims, feminists, or leftists.

    like i said in another post, i really wish i was a better critic like my poetry professor. he would put the whole class to shame

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    • #3
      Originally posted by VandalValo View Post
      ...
      Are squatting buildings in Chernobyl.
      But at least they would turn on
      The lights, that had been off
      For three decades.

      In God we trust. You can catch old birds with chaff in the dark. Jesus rose to turn on an electric chair.
      Last edited by dmitri11; 06-13-2018, 06:11 AM.

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      • #4
        Friends,

        so how long does it take for you to come up with something like this?? really 10 minutes??

        I sit at my computer, waiting for quitting time.
        I have searched every site, I can think of.
        The world is in chaos and flames,
        I get more depressed, i check the time.

        Oh God, 45 minutes. I might die
        I day dream, about my life,
        what changes I should have made.
        What if I was a super Hero??
        What powers would I have??
        What time is it now.. Oh crap 43 minutes.

        Maybe check the news again.
        I pray something good happened.

        Thank you.

        dr. Darrell of Michigan.

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        • #5
          Originally posted by DrDarrell View Post
          Friends,

          so how long does it take for you to come up with something like this?? really 10 minutes??

          I sit at my computer, waiting for quitting time.
          I have searched every site, I can think of.
          The world is in chaos and flames,
          I get more depressed, i check the time.

          Oh God, 45 minutes. I might die
          I day dream, about my life,
          what changes I should have made.
          What if I was a super Hero??
          What powers would I have??
          What time is it now.. Oh crap 43 minutes.

          Maybe check the news again.
          I pray something good happened.

          Thank you.

          dr. Darrell of Michigan.
          the obvious difference is a poet will not say thank you. the readers say thank you.

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          • #6
            Originally posted by DrDarrell View Post
            Friends,

            so how long does it take for you to come up with something like this?? really 10 minutes??

            I sit at my computer, waiting for quitting time.
            I have searched every site, I can think of.
            The world is in chaos and flames,
            I get more depressed, i check the time.

            Oh God, 45 minutes. I might die
            I day dream, about my life,
            what changes I should have made.
            What if I was a super Hero??
            What powers would I have??
            What time is it now.. Oh crap 43 minutes.

            Maybe check the news again.
            I pray something good happened.

            Thank you.

            dr. Darrell of Michigan.
            Dynamics and cyclicity of processes ... synchronization and desynchronization ... timer and clock.

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            • #7
              Sounds interesting! i like it

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