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  • Moonlight Dance

    This is actually something i wrote long ago. It's not the best but i still love it. Trying to get back into writing~


    The moon shines bright,

    and the river with all its might,
    reflects its radiant glow.
    The wind blows toward the river
    rippling the water
    moving the reflection round and about.
    The fish gives a slight splash
    to give a sudden flash
    to all around.
    The fire flies approach
    giving their glow
    and thus continues
    the moonlight dance
    until dawn arrives
    does all around hide and fade
    bringing an end to the reflection
    signaling the end
    of the moonlight dance

  • #2
    i personally didnt like the bright / might rhyme, but the rest is good.

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